I couldn't have said it better myself (actually I could, lol).
Though disfunktional is right, and all art at it's core is expression. Cheesebud was simply expressing himself, and who are you to say that what he had written is not art?
I agree that it may not have been what is considered a 'poem', but I had actually read the entire thing and would have to say that it at least tells a story.
BTW Cheesebud, did you happen to be on peyote while you wrote this?
I laughed when I read the part about eating the cactus.
Though disfunktional is right, and all art at it's core is expression. Cheesebud was simply expressing himself, and who are you to say that what he had written is not art?
I agree that it may not have been what is considered a 'poem', but I had actually read the entire thing and would have to say that it at least tells a story.
BTW Cheesebud, did you happen to be on peyote while you wrote this?
I laughed when I read the part about eating the cactus.