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07-05-2010, 08:06 AM

I am about to send this as a farewell.

This poem is presented for you to explore and comment on. feel free..

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I am but a jewel you will not polish
a song you will not sing
a voice with which you will not reason
and a heart you hold not near.

I am a friend at a distance..
An icon of change.

I am man of mystery and a dance in the rain.

Be it your desire to control what you cannot gain or the mind of another that does not bring you pain.. I am alone in this echo.. I alone am a moment in a dream.

Be well my friend..

Please respond..

Thanks

Stoner4Life · 07-05-2010, 08:17 AM

you sure you're wantin' me to
take a coupla cheap shots at ya?

07-05-2010, 08:23 AM

Beautiful!

Psychedelizard · 07-05-2010, 08:28 AM

I agree with TrichyTrichy. That is a beautifully written poem.

HillBillMt · 07-05-2010, 08:29 AM

click send

DankTreez14 · 07-05-2010, 08:36 AM

very nice indeed

07-05-2010, 08:46 AM

please feel free to express your reactions.

Thank you for the comments so far.. There are no bad comments there are no good comments there are just comments <pun intended>

budlykush · 07-05-2010, 09:03 AM

I think it's weird and corny. Seems almost HS level in many ways.

07-05-2010, 09:06 AM

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Originally Posted by budlykush

I think it's weird and corny. Seems almost HS level in many ways.

Very perceptive.. It is intended to reach such.

LiLWaynE · 07-05-2010, 09:07 AM

what is it about?

07-05-2010, 08:17 AM	#2
Stoner4Life Medicinal Advocate Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: wandering further down the path less travelled Posts: 24,474	you sure you're wantin' me to take a coupla cheap shots at ya?
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Psychedelizard New Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 8	I agree with TrichyTrichy. That is a beautifully written poem.
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HillBillMt Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: copper head road Posts: 163	click send
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DankTreez14 Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Land of the tree, Home of the blazed Posts: 292	very nice indeed
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07-05-2010, 09:03 AM	#8
budlykush My name? José Jiménez Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Right on the edge...... Posts: 252	I think it's weird and corny. Seems almost HS level in many ways.
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07-05-2010, 08:23 AM	#3
TrichyTrichy Guest Posts: n/a	Beautiful!
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07-05-2010, 08:46 AM	#7
JackTheGrower Guest Posts: n/a	please feel free to express your reactions. Thank you for the comments so far.. There are no bad comments there are no good comments there are just comments <pun intended>
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07-05-2010, 09:07 AM	#10
LiLWaynE I Feel Good Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: errwhere Posts: 2,966	what is it about? __________________ " The Most Influential ICMag Threads... lets see them "
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