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Telepod · 03-17-2004, 07:14 AM

Poor little flowers--
They bloom and die so quickly!
Trees see us that way.
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I was walking past a flowering bush which had just begun to bloom last week; already the ground beneath it was strewn with wilted petals. I thought this to myself spontaniously, then realized it was a haiku.

What a wonderful scent those flowers had...

Lucky420 · 03-17-2004, 06:06 PM

Nice

tragic1 · 03-17-2004, 06:19 PM

That was cool Telepod.

Number · 03-20-2004, 07:26 AM

That put a damn nice grin on my face.

03-21-2004, 05:33 AM

..goody!.... let me try one..

Blades of Green Gold
Soft rain and warm sunshine
The promise of spring!

..it's an experience!

NOKUY · 01-28-2007, 04:36 AM

ill try one too:

This thread was old
bored out of my fuking gord
now to get high

anyone else wanna try?

07-12-2007, 10:47 PM

NOKUY ..not fer nuttin but... that isn't a Haiku! Almost and it's kinda cool too.. but you have to conform to some construction standards to qualify.

The basic standard is the fact that the verse form must follow a strict code of structure involving SYLLABLES of the words used..

Line one: 5 syllables
Line two: 7 syllables
Line three: 5 syllables

..also, some mention of the current season is also worked in by the 'masters' as it is a more none formal requirement... but, as far as popular use goes.. is not always seen.

I look to the sky
Fearing the summer rains
My garden is drowned

07-12-2007, 11:00 PM

well dammit... I spent a half hour trying to figure out how to put in an image... screw it!! Clik the link if ya wanna see my reaction to this unbelievable flooding in Texas!!!

easyskanking · 07-13-2007, 12:10 AM

I like how you said "Trees view us that way."
they probably do.

FallenBuddha · 07-13-2007, 02:02 AM

last cicada's song
droning in the warm suns face
new spawn burrows deep

peace -fb

03-17-2004, 07:14 AM	#1
Telepod 'Frop Doktor Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Pleasure Saucer X Posts: 81	wrote a haiku for spring today Poor little flowers-- They bloom and die so quickly! Trees see us that way. === I was walking past a flowering bush which had just begun to bloom last week; already the ground beneath it was strewn with wilted petals. I thought this to myself spontaniously, then realized it was a haiku. What a wonderful scent those flowers had... __________________ Love doesn't dominate. It cultivates. -- Goethe ^^^
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03-17-2004, 06:06 PM	#2
Lucky420 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 58	Nice
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03-17-2004, 06:19 PM	#3
tragic1 Urban Gardner Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Every where and nowhere at once Posts: 341	That was cool Telepod. __________________ "I don't have education, I have inspiration and if I was educated I'd be a damn fool." - Bob Marley
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03-20-2004, 07:26 AM	#4
Number New Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 5	That put a damn nice grin on my face.
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03-21-2004, 05:33 AM	#5
HellBoy Guest Posts: n/a	..ohhh... nice one Telepod! ..goody!.... let me try one.. Blades of Green Gold Soft rain and warm sunshine The promise of spring! ..it's an experience! Last edited by HellBoy; 03-21-2004 at 05:43 AM..
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01-28-2007, 04:36 AM	#6
NOKUY Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: THE DEEP DARK WOODS Posts: 7,413	ill try one too: This thread was old bored out of my fuking gord now to get high anyone else wanna try?
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07-12-2007, 10:47 PM	#7
HellBoy Guest Posts: n/a	NOKUY ..not fer nuttin but... that isn't a Haiku! Almost and it's kinda cool too.. but you have to conform to some construction standards to qualify. The basic standard is the fact that the verse form must follow a strict code of structure involving SYLLABLES of the words used.. Line one: 5 syllables Line two: 7 syllables Line three: 5 syllables ..also, some mention of the current season is also worked in by the 'masters' as it is a more none formal requirement... but, as far as popular use goes.. is not always seen. I look to the sky Fearing the summer rains My garden is drowned Last edited by HellBoy; 07-12-2007 at 10:59 PM..
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07-12-2007, 11:00 PM	#8
HellBoy Guest Posts: n/a	well dammit... I spent a half hour trying to figure out how to put in an image... screw it!! Clik the link if ya wanna see my reaction to this unbelievable flooding in Texas!!!
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07-13-2007, 12:10 AM	#9
easyskanking Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 93	I like how you said "Trees view us that way." they probably do.
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07-13-2007, 02:02 AM	#10
FallenBuddha Chat Mod Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In the then... Posts: 1,041	last cicada's song droning in the warm suns face new spawn burrows deep peace -fb __________________ To quote the venerable Babbabud: [Babbabud]: no but we all know the outhouse aint far from the snackbar Co-founder and member M.A.C.K. Mid American Cannabis Kultivators. Growing herb to hit you like a truck. https://www.icmag.com/ic/showthread.php?t=124972 Fallen goes outside to play
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