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FRIENDinDEED · Jan 17, 2012

FullyMeltedDome said:
Kinda like SAW meets an Indoor Grow.Great read of Fiction,and very nice writing skills and the imagination to put it all together.Should be writing a Book Bro.

roflmao, i was just typing my opinion and then i look up and this was the last post . . . exactly what i thought cause thats what it sounds like.

not orignial, but if it were a show you woulda had me watching it faithfully to be honest.

lots of possibilities here, a myriad of avenues to go down. teh main character is alwasy taking a chance/risk. eventualy they ave to meet of course but that would be around season 2 or 3 (either near the end of 2 or the middle/beginning of 3)

damn man, massive possibilities with this one, love it

bravo

budman678 · Jan 17, 2012

Awesome

Fred el Gato · Jan 20, 2012

Part 3???

komrade komura · Jan 20, 2012

It is in the works...

growsjoe1 · Jan 20, 2012

great read....enjoyed much K+

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castout · Jan 20, 2012

very entertaining!!!!

komrade komura · Jan 21, 2012

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komrade komura · Jan 21, 2012

We will now return you to your normal programming.

komrade komura · Jan 21, 2012

Apologies for the delay....got slammed at work at the last minute by a lack of planning on the part of others.

growsjoe1 · Jan 21, 2012

Should get published as a short story...great read

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billy_big_bud! · Jan 21, 2012

i liked it bro. you really know how to keep the suspense going. a real page turner. im mean scroll something or other...... whats next?

paladin420 · Jan 21, 2012

komrade komura said:
Apologies for the delay....got slammed at work at the last minute by a lack of planning on the part of others.

Great story..I quit my voracious readin habit to Grow full time. Your story really filled a void I did not know was there. Please continue..

JustDoIt · Jan 21, 2012

Good god! That wasn't the direction I was expecting it to go in but very well written, impossible to walk away from!
Looking forward to the next story!

OrganicOzarks · Jan 21, 2012

FullyMeltedDome said:
Kinda like SAW meets an Indoor Grow.Great read of Fiction,and very nice writing skills and the imagination to put it all together.Should be writing a Book Bro.

I was going to say "Is this the next installment of Saw?"

I, as many have learned that just because a book, movie, or tv show has cannabis in it doesn't mean it is interesting. I.E. weeds.

LubdaNugs · Jan 21, 2012

Great read, I look forward to future stories.

komrade komura · Jan 21, 2012

Reckon we have all planned major grows in our heads.

Just have gone a wee bit further and created project plans, costs and revenue forecasts, spreadsheets for feeding and tracking individual plant growth. Folder structures for weekly photo collections.

Just add sativa and imagination.

Regrettably I didn't know Saw involved cannabis. Don't really do horror movies...too fucking squeamish....hahaha.

More of a 'shoot the pigs' sort of person.

pine boy · Jan 21, 2012

Great story...thanks for sharing it with us

komrade komura · Jan 21, 2012

The Gold Standard for dialogue (from Resevoir Dogs):

[Mr. White and Mr. Pink are washing up after the robbery went sour, trying to figure out what happened]

Mr. Pink: You kill anybody?

Mr. White: A few cops.

Mr. Pink: No real people?

Mr. White: Just cops.

hammalamma · Jan 21, 2012

komrade komura said:
The Gold Standard for dialogue (from Resevoir Dogs):

[Mr. White and Mr. Pink are washing up after the robbery went sour, trying to figure out what happened]

Mr. Pink: You kill anybody?

Mr. White: A few cops.

Mr. Pink: No real people?

Mr. White: Just cops.

Tarantino is the king of dialogue. True Romance is one of the best movies ever made, it will get you laid every time.
Great story and I'm glad it went the way it did , after the second part I thought it might be some happy ending crap. Good twist. The dialogue between Taylor and the narrator was almost too perfect imo.

komrade komura · Jan 22, 2012

For those who are interested, a somewhat different type of story has been posted here:

https://www.icmag.com/ic/showthread.php?t=230114

Mostly true...but nowhere resembling Forced Entry

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