PoeMs R us!! ~~~~~~~~ Throw it Down...

Okay, i know coming from me this is probably funny to some.. But poems are awesome, and they can mean so many different things to different people or mean the same thing... But I like to read or hear a great poem, so cmon folks, Ladies and Gentlemen lets hear a poem you wrote or one that you have read and like it dont matter what it is about to me.. If you want it to be love, or inspirational maybe a passion for cars or something funny, Even something to make you cry.. OR something that is sexeH Like i said whatever is on your mind or heart Lets hear it... Just dont get stupid please stay within TOU!! I hope this is the right place to put this... Ohh even you to cool guys can leave a poem it wont mean your a sissy..

Hey the nicer side of sackO...

PLEASE BE CIVIL!!!

I will start this off.. This is for all my friends here and who live far far away...
I hope you dont think this is the G word... AYYY.. heheeh..


A Place in My Heart

I love you my friend,
Though you are far away.
I love you my friend,
In so many ways.

I do not recall.
I can’t tell you when
This love it did grow
Or how did it begin.

But your words reach across
The miles that do separate
It’s your friendship I cherish
And want to celebrate

The everyday moments
That together are spent
The times that we laugh,
The times that we vent.

I want you to know
That however apart
You always will have
A place in my heart.

the above was written by sharon tulley...

peace

sackO

beautiful poem sack,
really enjoyed it

cheers m8

red.

thanx now if i can get other peeps to post up cool poems that would be great... Lots of cool creative people here.. Lets see how it turns out.. peace..

sackO

I was taking hits from my bong,
and it wasn't long,
before I'm thinking,
is what I'm doing so wrong?
It's just a plant,
again JUST A PLANT!
I want to smoke it but they say I can't!
They want to test me,
make me piss in a cup.
Well I ain't pissing in shit,
unless your drinking it up.
I'm gonna pack one
and take a big toke.
And then I'll probably giggle cause your laws are a joke.

By Big D

There once was a man, who moved to San Fran.
He used to smoke schwag and had a big empty bag.
Now the medicine man is all sticky & tan, smokes
whatever he can, no matter their babylon plans.
Wears silk shirts & nice leather boots, he likes to
grow & smoke some grapefruity Sweet Tooth.

Yes, I am high.

There we focking go D my brother that poem fuqing rocked brother... See thats what i want to see i love it...

SotF4twenty Bad ass brother keep em coming anytime... Lets see it folks drop some knowledge or some of what ya want... peace..

sackO

you
you mean a lot u really care
i look u up ur always there
u cry u laugh u make up my life
but Sack i could never be ur wife
IDO
seriously i love poetry
The Road Not Taken


TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth; 5

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same, 10

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back. 15

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
Frost

peace

awesome thread bro ,i write some but i dont think i would post any of it lol.one it most likely sucks and for 2 look at one

Yea i thought there was more creative people on here... than us few that posted cmon folks drop a poem even a friggn rhyme.. lol.. peace..

sackO

i have something i wrote at a real bad time in my life,i will look for it and post.i have lots of stuff that i have wrote but this piece i am talking about is my best work other then the book i am writing

my brother insanewick throw it down, thoooow it dooown.... I too have some on the puter saved i need oto find... peace..

sackO

xinsanewickedx said:

i have something i wrote at a real bad time in my life,i will look for it and post.i have lots of stuff that i have wrote but this piece i am talking about is my best work other then the book i am writing

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Post them shits I would love to hear them.

I got hundreds.... mine are lyrics

The End

The sky is falling, lay down and die.
The world as you know it must end.
You cannot stop it so don't even try,
you have no life to defend.
You've let world rot and decay,
and this you will certainly regret.
I'm sure that you think that you've seen the worst,
but you haven't seen anything yet.
You pump the earth full of poisonous waste,
never stopping to think.
What the hell are you gonna do man,
when there's no water to drink.
Building fortunes but killing off life,
no one taking a stand.
You've been walking the edge of a knife,
now you will die by my hand.

By Big D @ 15yrs of age (I'll start at the beginning,lol)

I got some stuff in the old freestyle thread but I can't seem to find it.

i will post as soon as i find them bros,i am pretty sure i know where to look just have to wait for kk to finish school then i can go look

I found the thread, its still alive! These were posted under my old name

__________________________________________________________________________
Up from the mud covered with slugs man I just need somebody to love.
Tend to these blisters on the bottom of my feet, draw me a bath fix me something to eat.
Clean the mud from out of my eyes, tell me a story, the one with the lies.
Where everything is peaceful, I love it when you say, lie to me and tell me that everythings ok.
___________________________________________________________________________

Deep down, if you listen, you can hear the chains of the link that's missin'.
Thru the doorway, there is a hall, but dont pay attention to the writing's on the wall.
A ways down, near the light, the four hundred twentieth door on the right!
If so inclined, just come on in, drink in the aroma, feel the power from with in.
In that room is the key, its in every person, and in everything you see!
But you may not like it, the feeling may be strange, cuz being truly free can be considered quite a change!
So just go on down the hall, past where the hope and justice was,

AND JUST JUMP INTO THE MADNESS, CUZ THATS WHAT MOST EVERYBODY DOES!
___________________________________________________________________________

In the midst of the divine,
I find,
love and comfort and peace of mind.
They got their's, I got mine.
We're fine,
resigned to the feeling as we drink the wine!
The wine of the gods that was forgiven.
The wine of the blood of the livin,
that were riding in a car that cant be driven.
And many other things that I have not mentioned.

Peace? Yeah thats what I said!
Its yellow,, it brown, its white, and! its red.
So dont smear the colors!
Listen to your mothers!
Love is all around us!
Show it to your brothers!

I'm getting that feelin'
I need some sexual healing
Come on Maria, bring your sister Juana
You know she wanna
Come over and we'll have a little fun

I'll set your body on fire
You set mine with desire.
Be smooth on me, I'll be smooth on you
I have enough love, there's room for two

Or three, you looking so damn pretty
Decked with crystal, damn you're so fine
I want to make you mine mine mine
Don't make me whine whine whine

For more, I hit the floor before I hit the top
You take me to the ceiling, way up into the sky
Am I smoking with Bob Marley? Willie Nelson?
Can't stop

Needing your love, I know you need mine too
You helping me, me helping you
And this is what the world should be
What you taught me

"Grow," Maria and Juana say, "Grow,
Overgrow this world. Show your brothers
and sisters, how much you love your girls"

And boy do I love em
For you know I'll never stop
I'll grow til I'm old and gray,
I'll smoke til the end of my days,
I'll fight for your freedom and mine,
I'll smoke til the sun don't shine
I'll fight until I drop,
I'll grow to spite the cops!


This is one I wrote that considers ethnicity, nationalism, colonialism, etc. in the Pacific, mainly the PI.

“…I went down on my knees and prayed Almighty God for light and guidance more than one night. And one night late it came to me this way—I don’t know how it was, but it came: (1) That we could not give them back to Spain—that would be cowardly and dishonorable; (2) that we could not turn them over to France and Germany—our commercial rivals in the Orient—that would be bad business and discreditable; (3) that we could not leave them to themselves—they were unfit for self-government—and they would soon have anarchy and misrule over there worse than Spain’s was; and (4) that there was nothing left for us to do but to take them all, and to educate the Filipinos, and uplift and civilize and Christianize them, and by God’s grace do the very best we could by them, as our fellow-men for whom Christ also died.”
- President McKinley defends U.S. expansionism in Pacific

Land of the free were
it not worship for false
gods shiny minerals
pressed pulp bloody ink
bought and sold flesh of
the bones, ties untied with
blood and dreams despair

In this world we are passed around
From one to another country
To take on another identity
That is not our own.

And now we are lost,
As to what do we call ourselves,
Who are our ancestors? When we
prefer, them over us.

Brown
is the color of death
the earth
the paths we built for them
the flag we wave for them
our culture awan*
assimilation at
its best.



(*nothing)

I live in the South, and it's so cold.
Can't grow no dope, is what I'm told.
But it ain't in my nature to fold,
or do what I'm told. Hell No.

Smoked my first joint at the age of 10.
Found me some seeds and at age 11,
I was sitting in a pile of heaven.
Staring at the weed that was gonna set me free
Cause I knew what I needed, More Weed in

My face. Started dealing, messing with the kiddies
selling dimes, trying to make some rhymes
In my spare time.

Wasn't long before I knew I was a farmer.
Needed land. Away from the man.
All that I can, get me a can of Spam.

Gotta save, gotta earn a dollar, make it holler
Save for a rainy day, Money might go away now
Any day now.

Anybody need a dime bag? So I saved.
Put away my rainy day money,
Didn't get a honey.
Got a real job, to fool the man,
Keep him off my land.

Gotta grow now,
Gotta get it high now,
Way up past my eye now.

Get the buds fat, big enough to choke on
Gonna get my toke on.
Lovin' it all day,
Never wanna put it away.

Gotta stop now, gonna hit my bong.
Gotta stop this song.
Come on toke along!

right on boys and girls its strarting to happen now... Bring it on some more good stuff... peace..

I knew once the ladies start droppin by, this thread would start to get fly..

sackO

Here's one in a similar vein as Weird Al.

I used to think that I could not get high,
And life was nothing but an awful sty,
But now I know the meaning of this world,
'Cus I can start soaring like a bird.

If I can smoke it, then I will pack it,
If I just grow it, there's no price to it....YEAH

I believe I can smoke,
I believe I can have a toke,
I sit around every night and day,
Smoke some weed and fly away.

I believe I can soar,
I buy some bud and then I grow some more,
Purple Kush and Casey Jones,
I have weed that will make you moan.
I believe I can smoke
I believe I can smoke
Oh I believe I can smoke

See I was on the verge of smoking crack
Now I'm smoking weed, ain't lookin' back
To grow all the strains, I must achieve
But first I know I got to make dry sieve

If I can toke it, then I will smoke it
If I just light it, there's nothing to it

I believe I can smoke,
I believe I can cough and choke,
Just take one hit and make me fly away,
Packin' bowls and hitting bongs all day.

I believe I can toke,
Look around and I'm surrounded by smoke
Buy a 5-pack of Bics, use 'em all up in a day,
Growin' dope 'til I'm old and gray.

Oh yes I believe I can smoke
I believe I can smoke,
I believe I can smoke.


Thank you, thank you very much.

^^^ Nice

hipLet
that poem is as cool as the other side of the pillow... Nice.. peace..

sackO